Hey dude!
I love this ship and the beginning of the story sounds very promising! You shoulkd keep going!! Please!

I really like this concept. Please write more!!
love,
LK

Aw, great start! It's so funny, one day I was flipping through OotP and this crazy idea for a pairing suddenly hit me and I immediately checked FF to see if there were any stories for Rab/Marlene. I hope you continue. Once I can get access to my real account again I'll be sure to add this to my alerts list!

very interesting pairing. :) good story, and I always love seeing stories with the more minor canon characters... plus with the seventh book on the horizon, hoping/expecting to see some more of Regulus. so, cool approach. hope to see more soon!
one thing, since Sirius didn't know when Harry asked him in the 4th book what Karkaroff and Snape might have on their forearms, I think the Dark Mark was probably not known about during the first war, but minor detail, totally inconsequential.
great job! :)

Excellent beginning. I will certainly keep up with this story. I hope you will update often.

Happy writing!
~Ky'atia