BRAVA! Fantastic! :D

Aww, it over DX

Poor Fuery having to stumble upon them during that awkward time. Wonderful way to close this series!

Bwahahaha! I'm going to miss this series. The thing I love most about your writing is your narrative input. (ie: "See? He hadn’t expected him.") The beginning was very realistic. I giggled at Roy's comments regarding subtitles. I think everything I watch lately is in subs. (Actually, I'm watching Bleach right now. ;P)

PS: Hee, I think I've been writing more then you lately. I just don't have time to post anything. :(

Good job. ^_^

This story was so unique and very entertaining. Fab job!

I wasn't expecting it to last only this long but it's your story and well, you're an exceptionally wonderful writer. :D
Anyways, I really like the ending. It's very subtle and sweet and cute too! Wonderful work! I love this fic. I'm looking forward to see more of your works soon!

Rin~

'With full faith that the mug would be dropped or spilled within the first ten seconds of Elysia’s possession, Riza set the cup down on a table.' This is such a good line!

Actually, this is a good chapter, all in all. Yay!

Ouch.

Good job in keeping Riza in character, btw. I like that she's still efficient and wears lipbalm, it's what makes her Riza. Pauvre Roy--or rather, pauvre Roy's ego.

Yet I'd caution that in some parts, the wording's a hair off. It makes the flow less...I don't know. Smooth.

Anyways, me likie! ^.^
-Rose

Woah... That was kind of unexpected. I knew Riza'd been chosen.. T_T Well, you did a great job. sorry for the late review. School's a nightmare..

Erinn~

lol nice one

um...

what exactly is a salad sandwich...sounds disgusting...

shudder...

what have you got against au roy, anyway? you tend to make him a bit of a calorie freak...:P

--grumble--

I HATE VALENTINE'S DAY...

well, not the day itself, but the expectations...

stitches?!?

good thing there weren't sharks in that water (looks upwards and whistles)

lol, this made me smile..."or who are prettier than i am" XD

Amazing.

Seriously amazing.

Almost laughted out loud (I'm not a big laugh-out-loud-er)