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Aww! Moombas are great; they're just like lions. Rai and Fuu are also great. You're story's also great!

I adore your wording. This was an amusing concept, made funnier by the way you phrased it. Things like "various cookie-related obscenities" made me giggle. -*

haahh! that was so cute! and, especially, funny! good ol' moombas! aw... poor thing got decked by fujin!

(one question, how would raijin know about the connection between laguna and squall?) ah, its all good!

Now *I* wanna cookie... _ poor Fuj

That was SO cute! I love Raijin & Fujin...and Seifer.

*Lmao* That was great!

lol! good luck to any moomba expecting charity from the great cyclops! -xiao

hehe cute i liked it. _

This story is so cute, especially the Moomba. It would be really cool if you would write a sequel to this story. _

Cute! Real cute, but I didn't know that Fujin could actually say more than one word...

hee hee hee aaaawwww-that was a realy cute, short and good fic! I like it. And I luuuuv moombas! They're soo kawaii!

That was hilarious! "processed corny goodness..." *falls out of chair, laughing histerically...*

hehe. _ fun story. now i want some cookies.