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| SageofAges729 2008-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseAh! This story has so much potential! Please update, I can't wait for this to continue. Now for my comments for the story. Hm...I wonder if Seth's alive. Or Cain. Ooh, Cain could cause a mountain load of trouble. Are you going to find a way to introduce Kamfer and Dietrich into this whole modern mess too? That would be really interesting. Especially if Dietrich managed to worm his way into Esther's life, only to be a complete...butt-head, putting it lightly. I imagine that might tick off our favrite silver-haired...well, he's not a priest, so...Commander? I dunno...oh crap, look at me ramble. Anyway, great job on this, can't wait for more. Please update soon, this has too much potenital to go to waste! |
| Libretto 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseYou should definitely continue with this idea. It's fantastic. I love your writing style. Please continue this story, it looks like there could be so much more you can write about! |
| Lady Nightshade 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is definately an awesome fic and I would very much like to see it continued. |
| PassionIsLove 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! Love it! Hope that you continue this story, I'm hooked now. |
| Anonymous 2007-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseAre you planning on finishing this fic? So far, it's an interesting plot. |
| revmoonie20 2007-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like your take on Trinity Blood. I hope that you plan on continuing the story. |
| openwindow 2007-03-31 ch 1, | abuseYES!! i TOTALLY agree with abel on the subject of UN members! btw, i LOVE your story, especially how it sort of lines up with our "world"! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE PLEASE! |
| Millie M. Banshee 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseAlright, this makes review number 14 so get writing. I love how you but this story together. Please update. I can't wait! |
| Yugata Tenshi 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseExellent writting o.o A few errors, but nothing distractful to the sorry. I absolutly love the 'what if..?' concept of it or AU x3 Your take is quite refreshing, I look forward to the next chapter, kudos! |
| Klarey 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abuseWow! I love it! Please update soon! |
| pinklove 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. I would truly appreciate it if you update. =] |
| stray 2007-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good and beleabale au twest on the story. I hope to see the nest chapter soon. |
| ShadowStar74 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseHi!. Glad that there is someone that write good stuff about Abel and Esther (I really don't like Ion x Esther pairing), since there is only a few, and it seems that TB is not largely difunded yet. I'll wait for updates soon. Please!? By the way I liked your Chrno Crusade fics a lot |
| Koori Youkai Hime 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseyes!! please continue. update soon! :D |
| reader713 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abusePlease continue the idea. It's good. |