 Palmer4President 2007-05-26 . chapter 1Hey Joe's Girl! I just joined this site and I found your fics and I just wanted to say that I love this one! Well, I love all of your fics, but I'm a real sucker for Bill/Karen fics in particular. Anyway, I hope you do end up writing more fics. It's a shame that your muse is on vacation, but when she comes back, I can't wait to see what you write! |
 landlady 2007-04-29 . chapter 1what can I say other than "simply great". Bill and Karen are my favorite couple, I love this relationship and you couldn't have described it better than you did. Please...is there any chance you gave us more? |
 ApplePieeLovver 2007-04-26 . chapter 1WOW...I mean...WOW! |
 Huddyalways-24-BK-MA 2007-03-18 . chapter 1I dont think you realize how great this really is!! I love it, I was tired when I started reading and I thought about bookmarking it and going to bed but I couldn't this was to good to stop reading! great job! ^_^ |
 The Nth Degree 2007-03-11 . chapter 1(flails cause is the biggest Bill/Karen fangirl on the planet, probably)
I've been searching for a good Bill/Karen fic for a while and you just gave it to me. I'm just grinning so much and can't stop :) THANK you! :) |
 Radwa 2007-02-23 . chapter 1Great story as always.I love the Bill/Karen relationship.They're officially my new favorite couple too.Hope the writers won't kill them soon. |
 Gump 2007-02-06 . chapter 1 Your fanfic's like a box of chocolates. You never know what youre gonna get. |
 Meredith 2007-02-02 . chapter 1 I absolutely loved this story. I wish we had some background on Bill & Karen's marriage, etc. before season 6 started. This captured my thoughts perfectly. You did a fabulous job - keep writing more. I love Bill & Karen! |
 Duff89 2007-02-01 . chapter 1Great fic- I think Bill and Karen are perfect for each other and I'm so glad they tied the knot! |
 Flight of Folly 2007-01-31 . chapter 1I strongly advise you to continue listening to your muse; this is a wonderful story.
One of the great advantages of 24 from the FFN perspective is that there are these large time gaps between seasons for us to indulge our imagination. And you have obviously been feasting yours. Not only did you cover the happenings of the missing months, but you really profited from these events to explore the characters of both Bill and Karen in what I think were extremely realistic portrayals. As apparent by our prophetic preview of Karen's resignation! (You should probably add a episode 6 spoiler note to cover your final comment.)
The ending was particularly emotive but I have to ask: why is it always the female who makes the career sacrifice? Personally I could more easily see Bill as a househusband than Karen as a housewife... although as you pointed out in this story, neither are especially suited to this role.
Remember, no matter what the 24 writers have in store for Bill and Karen, they can always live large in our imaginations.
Natalie |
 Tigerlily Brown 2007-01-30 . chapter 1I love BillKaren stories! And that was an excellent one, by the way. I like how you kind of softened them a little. On the show they're more professional, except the part where he asks her for breakfast. A lot of times that would have seemed OOC, but you did a good job of keeping them in character. |
 Macadamia Nutcase 2007-01-30 . chapter 1Well done! Bill and Karen are really interesting characters with plenty of potential, and they also make a fantastic pair. I love how they are the powerful, well-connected couple this season, and after last night, I'm dying to see them team up again and inflict some punishment on Lennox! This is a lovely fic, and I like how you've filled in the gaps in between seasons. Great writing and great story! |
 SG1Bauer 2007-01-30 . chapter 1Excellent, excellent story! I love Karen and Bill togehter, they're such a cute couple and it's good to see fanfic about them. Yours is the first one i've read with this pairing and i absolutely loved it. Very well written and you did a great job of keeping Karen and Bill in character. Hope you will write more stories about them. |
 take5 2007-01-29 . chapter 1I just want you to know that I love this story!! The only reason I watch 24 is because of Bill and Karen, so we can worry about our favourite couple together, lol. I love it and I am completely in love with your other B/K story too! Please keep this up--it makes me very happy!! Lol! |
 Spooky Bibi 2007-01-29 . chapter 1I loved it! I'm a huge fan of Bill since season 5 and I'm glad that you still write about him. It's almost as good as your other one, Past, Present and Future. I too hope they will have some sort of happy ending this season. |