-blinks-

...I'm speechless. What a lovely story. (Or gruesome, but eh.)

Anyways, I feel terrible for Fearow. Seriously, every time in the game you beat someone, they go, 'ooh, aren't you a strong trainer?' Well, no, it's the pokemon. Once again, what a great story! Two sides of the same coin...

That Fearow said it: his trainer is a self-serving bastard. And utterly predictable too, lol.

It's nice to see a fic that shows how pigheaded trainers are: mostly it's fics where the Pokemon are treated as intelligent puppets who always obey their 'friend' (read: slave-driver).

Sayonara!

Capybara 773

You have a knack in writing! Your detailed descriptions made the scene very believable. However, you don't need to repeat "the same story viewed from two different perspectives," it was clear the first time you wrote it. But, I'm enjoying it thus far!

You are the first writer I've seen to use a Fearow! That gets me excited! I don't really know why...

Please update soon, I'd like to see where you are going with this!