very very nice!

I enjoying your piece alot... please feel free to contemplate Grissom as ofter as you can.

Outstanding, excellent, fantastic, magnificent, memorable, sensational, wonderful...I'm going a little overboard here.

I really like your well written pre-Vegas story.

I don't know if you plan to continue this or if it's a one shot but I LOVE it. Would love to see you continue but it stands quite well by itself too! Please write more though... ; ) Love it.

Breathtaking!

Lovely lovely story. It made me smile. anne

I agree, this story is the definition of fluff, in the BEST way possible! I loved your story, great job!

great job at a backstory... it has great potential for you to keep going even though you said its complete.

update!