|Reviews for Past Is Not Yet Forgotten|
| SunsetOfForever21 7/24/11 . chapter 2
LOL I have stories from 2007 I still have to update too... haha either way this is very good and I hope you update sometime when something comes to ya :P. Good job.
| Squelf 7/29/09 . chapter 2
This is pretty good. Ive always imagined what happens at the end of this movie. its one of my favorate movies of all time... hope you publish more soon D
| purered 6/26/08 . chapter 2
I wanna know more!
the suspense is killing me!
| Boberick 5/17/08 . chapter 2
Not bad. :)
| the sober irishwoman 3/11/08 . chapter 2
i like the update. hope to see more on the way!
| canuck17 3/9/08 . chapter 2
liking it. update soon:D
| Twilight Power 1/5/08 . chapter 2
I still want you to continue writing this, but I didn't like the begining. Here's how I would've written it, if you're intrested.
'He got up and trudged over to the door and pulled it open. He stood in shock at what… Rather, who stood in front of him. She was here. Here. He hair tied back tightly and in sweats and a t-shirt, looking as if she hadn’t had any sleep in a few weeks.
“Hi, I’m Kayliegh, but I think you already know that,” she told him as he kept the door opened. “Now, what I don’t know is who you are.”
“I’m Evan. How’d you find me, Kay?” he asked her, scared as to why Kayliegh knew his name.
“A whole lot of research,” she told him. “Now, I have some questions for you, and I am not leaving until they are answered.”
Evan couldn't take it anymore. He tried to close the door on her but she jammed her foot in the doorway and stuck her head in the crack of the door. He saw that she wasn't going to go that easily. He opened the door fully, gesturing his arm as a sign that it was okay to come in. When she had made her way in he said in a polite manner, “What do you want?”
“How do you know me? And, how do I know you?” she asked, adding the second part as a last minute thing.
“We met at a birthday party when we were kids,” he answered simply but uneasy.
“You threatened me and my family, correct?” she continued and he nodded. “Why?”
Evan was now more uncertain than before. “It was in your best interest.”
“So I wouldn’t kill myself when I got older, or get blown up by a dynamite?” she leaned forward, gauging his reaction.
“H-How?” he stuttered out, not being able to finish the sentence. She shouldn’t be able to remember it. Any of it. Every other time he’d gone and changed anything, he was the only one to remember it. So, how had she?'
But, that's just my opinion. It just seems better. Remember, I still want you to continue.
| boogotu 12/30/07 . chapter 2
Love it plz continue
| boogotu 12/29/07 . chapter 1
i like where this is going :)
| Trece 9/14/07 . chapter 1
Continue it's a cool fic
hope you update soon.
| Twilight Power 8/28/07 . chapter 1
Well, looks like Kayleigh looks like she kinda remembers bits and pieces of her "past lives." I say you should continue this. That way everyone else of his friends and family would kinda recall everything like Kayleigh. And you could explain how everyone kinda recalls everything.. I forgot that because Evan changed time he prevented his father's death. I beg of you! PLEASE CONTINUE!
| emopup8 8/17/07 . chapter 1
i say you continue its good and i wasnt overly crazy bout the movie. altho i liked # 1 better then the 2nd one
| Ekoaleko 7/10/07 . chapter 1
This is really good... the sadness is like, perfectly written. Butterfly Effect is a really sad movie in my point of view, anyway...
| the sober irishwoman 6/21/07 . chapter 1
i like it. i think you should continue.
| Amako-chan 5/26/07 . chapter 1
I like it so far...It's not bad...
The ending line confused me though...
"She sat up in dead quickly."
That just didn't make sense...
Other than that...I say continue it, 'cause it looks pretty interesting _