Reviews for Past Is Not Yet Forgotten

Reviews For: Past Is Not Yet Forgotten

purered 2008-06-26 ch 2,	abuseI wanna know more! the suspense is killing me!!
Boberick. 2008-05-17 ch 2,	abuseNot bad. :)
dallylover1990 2008-03-11 ch 2,	abusei like the update. hope to see more on the way!
kinGsFaN 2008-03-09 ch 2,	abuseliking it. update soon:D
Twilight Power 2008-01-05 ch 2,	abuseI still want you to continue writing this, but I didn't like the begining. Here's how I would've written it, if you're intrested. 'He got up and trudged over to the door and pulled it open. He stood in shock at what… Rather, who stood in front of him. She was here. Here. He hair tied back tightly and in sweats and a t-shirt, looking as if she hadn’t had any sleep in a few weeks. “Hi, I’m Kayliegh, but I think you already know that,” she told him as he kept the door opened. “Now, what I don’t know is who you are.” “I’m Evan. How’d you find me, Kay?” he asked her, scared as to why Kayliegh knew his name. “A whole lot of research,” she told him. “Now, I have some questions for you, and I am not leaving until they are answered.” Evan couldn't take it anymore. He tried to close the door on her but she jammed her foot in the doorway and stuck her head in the crack of the door. He saw that she wasn't going to go that easily. He opened the door fully, gesturing his arm as a sign that it was okay to come in. When she had made her way in he said in a polite manner, “What do you want?” “How do you know me? And, how do I know you?” she asked, adding the second part as a last minute thing. “We met at a birthday party when we were kids,” he answered simply but uneasy. “You threatened me and my family, correct?” she continued and he nodded. “Why?” Evan was now more uncertain than before. “It was in your best interest.” “So I wouldn’t kill myself when I got older, or get blown up by a dynamite?” she leaned forward, gauging his reaction. “H-How?” he stuttered out, not being able to finish the sentence. She shouldn’t be able to remember it. Any of it. Every other time he’d gone and changed anything, he was the only one to remember it. So, how had she?' But, that's just my opinion. It just seems better. Remember, I still want you to continue.
boogotu 2007-12-30 ch 2,	abuseLove it plz continue
boogotu 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abusei like where this is going :)
Trece 2007-09-14 ch 1,	abuseContinue it's a cool fic hope you update soon.
Twilight Power 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseWell, looks like Kayleigh looks like she kinda remembers bits and pieces of her "past lives." I say you should continue this. That way everyone else of his friends and family would kinda recall everything like Kayleigh. And you could explain how everyone kinda recalls everything.. I forgot that because Evan changed time he prevented his father's death. I beg of you! PLEASE CONTINUE!
emopup8 2007-08-17 ch 1,	abusei say you continue its good and i wasnt overly crazy bout the movie. altho i liked # 1 better then the 2nd one
Ekoaleko 2007-07-10 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good... the sadness is like, perfectly written. Butterfly Effect is a really sad movie in my point of view, anyway...
dallylover1990 2007-06-21 ch 1,	abusei like it. i think you should continue.
Amako-chan 2007-05-26 ch 1,	abuseI like it so far...It's not bad... The ending line confused me though... "She sat up in dead quickly." That just didn't make sense... Other than that...I say continue it, 'cause it looks pretty interesting ^_^ ~Amako-chan~
Shawn-n-Bell 2007-03-04 ch 1,	abuseI see that you haven't contuined this story, you defentily should though. I am intersted beyond belief.
Maurean 2007-02-24 ch 1,	abuseWEll, nice fic. I say you should continue. I wanna see where this goes. Good luck. MAUREAN

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