Interesting story. I am an old woman, but I see some very insightful writing that will be valued in the up coming years. Check out the "Emerald Tablet", a translation of an ancient document that has yet not been discovered, written by Thoth an Egyptian God. Study the Chakra system more and be familiar with the colors, green is the heart chakra of love and compassion. The old fairy tales have mystical knowledge in them that I am still trying to understand. The red slippers, yellow brick road, emerald city in the Wizard of Oz, I think are references to the chakra system. Also, you seem to be interested in spiritual things and may be interested in

Hey I rly like it and it's been so long since u last updated :( plz post something soon.I just can't wait 2 read more!

Well, well! So far, so good! I'm looking forward to the rest!

I feel your pain.

My computer had crash because of a worm (was in the middle of editing my work)

So I moved to my laptop, which was then later brutally murdured by my Dad.

Now I got a Windows Vista. Joyous to Windows Vista.

It does NOT freeze on me, nor does it lag. You can imagine my nose growing.

Your fanfic ish so awsome! I barely find any ORIGINAL Saiyuki fanfics. Let alone find any OC with it. I'll be watching you.

hi sfduifyiasgf 8dhgfasdlkfyge... and :) here, this is my acc dumb name huh?
any wayz i just like to say that i love the new chappie but the cliffie was very evil and
i just think the T.V series sucked but the original storie is cool
and yes, please write a saiyuki fanfic 4 this!

update update update!

hehehe...in the beginning dwynwen is like goku in the first episode of gensomaden saiyuki cuz goku was like im tired sanzo and im hungry

it would be funny if this was saiyuki instead of xiyouji

wow! u must really love saiyuki

oh yea and by the way xiyouji kinda sux afta u watched saiyuki bcos it's less ...well...saiyuki-ish?...nice?

well in all xiyouji sux compared 2 saiyuki

I can't wait for more! Please update!^_^

Ok loved that last part. ^_^

lolz You know your chinese. Btw liked the teaching part Wu Kong is in character there. lolzz i think you and me are quite alike you know. actually. I had some of the ideas you had too... *swt* if you looked at my fic 'the games' you would know. But its taken down now so... yeah. Anyway I'm going to archive this fic on my website you don't mind right? Did I tell you this before? Ok. I'm sure there are some ppl out there who might just appreciate this. The trouble is (ok I'm being brutally honest here) your fic is kinda like mary sue... or self-insert fic... maybe if you created a more original main character it would be better. You writing is ok but not original enough. So... yeah... trust me, I've gone through this stage before, so don't be discouraged, write more and you'll improve, I'm sure of it, I can see that you have potential, ne? You obviously love wu kong and journey to the west very much, that's a good start. ^_^

Ooh deja vu. It's okay, continue, continue.