Wow, that copy X isn't very nice. To shoot a kid in t he back. but my this was quite an intense story fo a while. Zero went though hell didn't he?

Captivating, truly captivating! You managed to tell the story in a brilliant manner, whilst keeping true to MMZ...A truly brilliant fanfiction!

Damn. That was cool. And scary.
And so Neo Arcadia remains under X's oppressive rule. Um...I thought X died.

Very, very enthralling. You explained everything new that you added to the MMZ world quite well, without disrupting the flow of the story.

Definitely a * story!