This is the best Vader/Leia one I've seen, and covers the movies the best, imho. :D Great job!

A great story. Very good.

Aw, that's so sweet! Reminds me a bit of my sister and I. "The Force is strong with this one." DUH!

I love this story, and I love your post-script. That's what I always feel like saying to people who flame. Con-crit is fine, but dude, flaming is so not cool.

great story! its actually really beautiful. i wish a writer like you could create a full length story based on this one. its really great. i love vader/leia father/daughter moments and stories. great story!

No hate mail for you.
I like how the events all blend into each other.
Sweet and touching.

I flame you! Flame, flame, flame, flame. Whew. (QN fans herself.) Do you feel that? It's getting rather hot in here, or is it just me? And what's that funny smell? Smells like something's burning. Must be from all that flaming that's been going on. LOL! Just kidding. ;)

Seriously, I LOVED IT! :) I've often wondered if Vader noticed how much Leia looked like Padme. And what he was really thinking when he found out about Luke, and then finally learned of his daughter, Leia.

*CLAPS* Great work!

QN :)

Wow.

That was absolutely amazing.

Wow. That was powerful.
Nicely done.

I like your style, you have a gift with capturing the emotion of the moment and placing your reader in your character's mind.

It was interesting to follow Vader's thoughts like that.

:-) this is one sweet story!