as much as i love happy romantic fluff, its refreshing to read things that are so vivid and realistic that they could be true stories. this is brilliantly told and very very down to earth and real. theres enough of the lovey dovey stuff to keep us romantics enthralled, but its a very realistic piece and i love that. well done on a fantastic story

welcome back to the KBOW fan fic world!
This is nice in a really sad way, I like I like.
But I love your previous oneshot better. YOu know, the Coffee and Cigarettes one? Like a year ago? Been long since you update. Hint

Ooh, I like this. a lot.
I like most of what you write, but this one really stands out.. i like how its so bittersweet - not like most of the fluff that is written about this ship. And most of all i love how its -real-... how its not all 'and they lived happily ever after'

so, thanks for a great read, and I can't wait to see more from you..

Ash xx