Well... that was tense.

Wow...

Dark, but very well written

I like explosions

that was deep. i never have seen tenten in that light but its a good thing.

hm...it's not Neji since you said "his dark eyes" so I'm gonna have to go with Sasuke? I can see him going into ANBU, but not Neji as much.

where do you get such inspriation from? it's truly marvelous, to see different stories and perspectives on characters. especially when one such as yourself is writing the stories well. :)

aahh I still love the quote at the end . It sets my mind into all other sort of fanfic goodness.

Yeah sorry about that. I got so confused because I was reading so many different fanfics the whole day today (yeah, that's my life) and so I got the names terribly mixed up. So sorry! I fixed it though. Again, so sorry if it confused you!

Hmm... Really?

I liked it. ( - _ -a)

OO. LOVELY. And is the captain Sasuke, by any chance?

very creative...fits tenten and ANBU very well. got me thinking on tenten's character as well. nice job

...She always did have the best and coolest weapons...

Good job. I like the quotes, they made it cool...

Wow. Intense and fast-paced... not too bad for being out of your genre. *Smiles* SasuTen, much? Don't worry, i definitely approve. :P Nice work!

*Kat

Loved.

wow..that was perfect. really it was. the idea was unlike any other i've seen . it was brilliant. well-written too. great job