hey, nice poems, i liked them! nice job!
by the way, do you think that you could drop by my story and give it a read and review. i'd really appreciate it if you did. =D

I helped with the limerick bellow btw. Oh and we really like the poem. made me laugh.

Two girls came across this small work of fiction,
Which had impressive use of rhyming diction,
They laughed and they cried,
'Til they half split their side',
And couldn't find anything to rhyme with fiction.