o... nice twist at the end... I like it... and I love Ellie's last line, "You're right, I blame you." it's just so perfect. It's exactly what I would say (I'm sorta like Ellie when it comes to certain things... guess that's why she's my fave character but that's a little off the topic). I hate Emma... oh, I hate her so much, I really do... that's off topic too... But I really wanted to read this after you told me you'd written it and I'm glad I did... tis good... but I must go read some more stuff so... till later.

JOA! I love this story, oh poor little Emma, playing the victim once again, good job

Hahaha! (I'm sorry, that laugh is completely inappropriate, except that last line of "You're right--I blame you." drove me nuts and I couldn't help but laugh, and smile).

Beautifully written, and well thought out. I loved how you pointed out that Emma really hasn't known Sean for a while, the he honestly grew to be a better person than Emma ever could have molded him into (which she constantly tried to do). She had no right to treat Ellie like that with several of her statements, nor did she have the right to but herself into Ellie and Sean's relationship.

Bravo. *claps*
MJ

Wow, that was great. I loved that little twist at the end. I hated the Sean-not-being-alive part. but anyways, this was a great story -- good job. And I know what you mean - One-shots ARE ten times better.

Whoa, I wasn't expecting that twist at all, man! lol. Oh yeah, this is Nikki. Aw, it was so emotional for a oneshot. Normally, I don't get that invested in oneshots, but this was really powerful, and I liked how you dispensed all the info slowly (baby, the Emma angle, how he died at the beginning). Placing the ultrasound near the grave...nice touch.:D It's so angsty and so short. :( Man Joa! lol. Great job. I recognized your name, and was like, I've never read a Joa fic, and I'm of course glad I did.