yeah great chapter.

Aw...that was great. I loved how you kept to the story for so long and gave us the inner thoughts of our beloved characters. I'm so glad we got a happy ending for Lucy and Caspian. That part of the book where they left him always made me cry.

For me the star's daughter never made a whole lot of sense. Especially when his happiness was so short lived as told in The Silver Chair. So thank you for rewriting canon for us.

-Ellie

Hi! Just wanted to tell you that this story is fantastic. You're a Christian aren't you? You write like one (that's totally a compliment btw). And, you're writing is good (skill-wise) and I feel like I've come across this lovely gem of fanfiction. Just thought I'd let you know. So, yeah, good job, and yay!

This was very nicely done. I've been scouring the internet for Caspian fanfics, and this one is lovely. Congradulations on writing such a beautiful piece!

That was very nice, but really didn't require an M rating. You're kind of cutting down your readers by marking it as such. Very good writing, though, and cute story.

WOW. This is seriously one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I wish more people would read it, and those who don't are missing out. Please continue!!

cheers,
Habs :D

Great story! I love the pairing Lucy/Caspian. I wish that Lucy could have stayed with Caspian in the end of the book.

My child, even in your world there is a power greater than all others, a power you have already have admitted to me you have. Love.

Did you get that from HP?
Eve

That was really good, very cute. I love this pairing.

dude! i like it!
eve

That was such a sweet story! It was exactly how I would have wanted the book to end. Really, it was wonderful.

I so love this fic I've read it all til here in just one go
I love it

Ok, how old is Lucy in this story? I always imagened her around 12 during this book.