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| x-Sparkles-x 2007-05-04 ch 2,  | abuseooh malfoy clones lol so nice hope you update soon i like this story x |
| WJEvans 2007-03-21 ch 2, | abuseYou have a few spelling mistakes but I loved this chapter. “I think I rather eat with a Mudblood” – Ha, that made me laugh. |
| kalira 2007-03-20 ch 2, | abuseThat was a good chapter and I like the idea, but it would be so much better if it were longer. Plus there were quite a few spelling mistakes throughout the chapter. First of all... Giny's name is 'Ginevra' not 'Ginerva' and it's the 'Burrow' not the 'Borrow.' It would probably be beneficial to you if you went and got a beta reader. They are tremendously helpful and can help you with things other than just the spelling and grammar. I know that when I helped some people out I helped them with plot development as well. There are many sites where you can find them. The best are on Perfect Imagination, FictionAlley and (In the forums.) Good luck! |
| bigred20 2007-03-16 ch 2, | abuseOMG that was to good i loved it you did such a good job i can't wait for more |
| darkmb101 2007-03-15 ch 2, | abusespellcheck- use it. |
| RipleyWriter93 2007-03-15 ch 2, | abuseOkay, so this chapter completely rocked! |
| RipleyWriter93 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI kno this'll just be a great story, how bout a new chapter? |
| WJEvans 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abuseCan't wait for th next chapter |
| bigred20 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abusethat was a good beginning and i can't wait to read more. |
| SamanthaBrookes 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abusesounds like it'll be an interesting story :) just a note, in your summary, it says twin sister. it made me think that you were saying that draco was a twin, only that his sister was a year beneath him. but i understand now. :) keep writing, i want to read more. Samantha |