cool,very nice,you should write more chapters

I really like your story! So is it going on? (pleeaaas!)

You really should update soon, this is really intresting, im just now rereading the whole Memory, Sorrow and Thorn seriese and on a whim looked up fanfictions, this is the one that caught my attention so like cool! Please update soon.

I love this story so far! really really interesting. I love when you describe the city, that's my favorite parts. please keep writing, the world needs more Tad Williams fanfics!

Please update! It is a wonderful story and I want to read more.

It's a real shame you haven't continued this story. It's one of the best Tad Williams based stories that I've found on the entire internet. I hope your muse returns. Would love to see King Seoman make an appearance too!

I definitely liked your story, even though it seems like you probably won't continue with it...

It's been more than ten years since I've read the books, so I don't remember a lot of the details, but your writing kinda made me want to go back and read it all again.

I like the story. It's something new :p

Bye, O_E

WOW! This chapter was great! Keep up the great writing! I can't wait to find out what you write next! I love this series.

WOW! I totaly loved it! I salut you my felow Jiriki admirer ;D I wish that I could write something more about your exelent writing but my poor english prevent me... Xd

You want a review? Of course, but don't blame me for the mistakes I make. It's a shame, my English ist not good enough to express how much I like your writing. And I love your Jiriki. When I read the books I always liked him the most...hm, I liked Eolair, too but the Sithi was my favorite. Many thanks that I could now read a story with him as a main character.

WE! Another wonderful chapter my dear!

_ I wish I could get out of this solid concrete writer's block I'm molded into.

I have an idea... you distract Medusa and I'll try and make a run for it! Are you willing to help? Please? Maybe then I could get something done!

Keep writing luv

SI

This is a great story! Please update soon!

Hi,

I like it very much. Please write more.

I just can't possibly wait for another chapter! _

I guess I have to! Oh well

Love

SI