 Jamarie 2007-06-22 . chapter 4OH! AKITO MUST FIND OUT X) lol yay they're finally together having some hot smex xD about time dude!! and yes! there must be drama! and angst! OH XD complications must be present! and everybody loves them drama lol
continue updating! haha. i'm so lovin' this |
 Jamarie 2007-05-28 . chapter 3Aww... this is such a cute little piece of work you have here xD Actually, yes, i've been waiting for chapter three to come out for quite sometime now and... BOOM! yay~!! I love how adorably shy haru's acting... very sweet. and yeah kori's such a nice boy too... very nice. lol please, update faster and more! i'm really fascinated on how they're gonna hook up xD then we can proceed on with the smex (pervy me lol)
~go you go! |
 Nightgate13 2007-04-09 . chapter 2Wow, really cool. I love this and hope you update soon. |
 MidniteHearts 2007-03-13 . chapter 2this story was pretty good so far. btw the i noticed that your char. has the same last name as my char has when i post another FB story |
 seto'swifey 2007-02-03 . chapter 2Why r the chapters like super short? I like the story, it's just that the chapters are too short. More people may actually read it if you make them longer. |
 Nini the Kakashi Obsessed 2007-02-03 . chapter 2interesting. i'm not usually one for OC fanfics but this seems good enough. update! |
 Nini the Kakashi Obsessed 2007-02-03 . chapter 1cool... ON TO THE NEXT CHAPPIE! |