 RandomlyRandomness 2007-01-30 . chapter 1HOORAH! I like it! But you have some spelling mistakes here and there, you rush this? Still it is good so don't get the wrong idea. I espicially like the fact that you said Tomo and Yomi were NOT in love, that's still my least favorite pairing. Hope to see updates of other stories you've created some time in the future. |