well written, pleasse continue.

Good ch. I like that Bella is taking control,lol.

Update soonerz!

You write really well. I like this story, update soon

Wow! Bella's not the same Bella, she's a pervert! (=OOC ;) But a cliffhanger?! Update soon!!
Ah, yes! I like very much the first chapter.

Greetings from Spain,
Alex

hey it's good so far! keep up the good work and please update soon!
~Kaya

Interesting.
Update soon, please?
:)Bee

This is the BEST preface I think I've ever read in my life,lol.

This is gonna be a great story,I can tell.

Good ch. Update soonerz!

Lovely.

why not make official,come edward ,update soon

Aw, thats sad! Update soon

Wow. I liked this chapter a lot and I cant wait to read more. It was very well written and so far you've seem to have written the characters the same way they are in the book, which can be hard. So keep up all the good work.

Ooh! What happened? I want to know! Update soon!!