Oh wow, that was really nice. the very beginning line was pretty and somehow it suits mariah. i love your writing style- you have improved SO much since the first fic you wrote and I can't remember it's name(though i wish I could) and its totally amazing how you've improved =] i love your writing. yeah. kai is sexy.

Beautiful, just beautiful.

You captured Mao, Kai, and Rei beautifully without making it seem OOC or strange. And you made a sort of ReiMaoKai triangle without really making a ReiMaoKai triangle. I salute you for that.

Kudos!

Dude. Freakin' awesome. I love you. End of story. It's like a KaiMaoRei, yet not really. It's fluffy, yet not. It's pretty :3

I think I get it, but I'm feeling really slow lately (not enough sleep). So... yeah. Whatever the case, it's really good (even my half-asleep self can see that). So... yeah. Meh, will leave you an email going on and on about the ultimate awesomeness of this ficlett.

And I was SUPPOSED to be the first reviewer... but someone beat me to it T_T But I'm still your #1 reviewer... because I said so. Sh.

aw!! al i have 2 say.