sweet

The idea, of itself, is overused to bring unusual (or not-so-unusual) couples together but you saved it by the reality of the situation.

Kaoru is still Kaoru and Hikaru is Hikaru. GOD, I love how you characterize. It's all so...so...so SPOT ON!

...You aren't the creator of Ouran who secretly wants to do Hitachiin yaoi but your manager won't let you because it's so 'forbidden', are you?

:P

My heart breaks for Kaoru every time I read one of these fics. The ones that are so right that I can't force myself to forget the fact that if anyone's going to get hurt; he is.

It's really sweet...
I love the way you write, you're cool.

...Nnh. Well... nice concept? I agree, it could have been better. I do like the idea of the olde Seven Minutes in Heaven game a la twincest, but it got too introspective, where it might have worked better as mischievious and tongue-in-cheek. Then again, that could be just my weird and irreverant sense of humor. I liked how the silent communication bit was less than spoken but more than thought, though. That could be really interesting.

Well, keep scribbling down whatever pops into your shimmering mind because, rest assured, we rabid FFNet'ers will read it. Cheerio, dearie!
-Rai

No this was awsome, I liked how you wrote it, and all the detail you put into it.

It was great writing! I thought you definently got Kaoru and Hikaru personals down.

Good =D
Just great!
I know this game... here in Brazil we call it "True or Kiss" or simply "Kiss in the Dark".
Very good story! o/

*sighs contentedly* It's really sweet Shi-chan. And I don't think it's at all a "regression to 16." The writing is beautiful.

I really enjoyed. Thanks for posting it and not scrapping it or something.