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Lady Jelly Sandwich
2008-11-18 . chapter 5
Please update this!
(The Best)Random Reader
2008-02-22 . chapter 5
Ah! o.< What a horrible place to leave off... I love the idea for this fic! Throwing in the Nny references was awesome.
Also, it's great to see a fic where the characters stay pretty IC (well, Zim doesn't count since he's... pretty screwed up for obvious reasons in this). I hope the fic is written to the end! Especially since now I'm all curious as to all the other glitches Zim's gonna go through. *nodnod*
Arcellant
2007-11-10 . chapter 5
Update please! It's so interesting!
ItsukaFuuryu
2007-08-03 . chapter 5
Hey love da story. and if you do make it ZADR, I'll love you even more. But either way, i love it. Plz update soon
Lucy
2007-07-12 . chapter 3
K-k-k-kissy scene??.. *Twitches.* O_o

Well, when it comes to that, you're pretty good at it.. ._.
BlindDestiny
2007-05-23 . chapter 5
Horrah you updated!
I liked the chapter so much I stopped reading half-way through and drew my own lil' emo-Zim... =]
Mommaleasey
2007-05-23 . chapter 5
Wonderful! The style is brings such a feel to the characters! And even though Zim is being all PMS'y, (hee hee!) You make it funny! I love it! Whats even better is you get them in character without copying Jhonen! Brilliant! I look forward to the next chapter!
Extraintrovert
2007-05-23 . chapter 5
"Zim!" He yelled, kicking the door. "You better not be dead in there!"

Once again, you present us with a delighful romp of insanity, attempted Irkencide, poor confused Dib and a very smart-arsed piece of machinery. Not much to say here, as it appears you're beginning to scrape the barrel at this point looking for bouts of humour (however hilarious they may be) and while I'm sorry about the un-success of Avarice, really, these types of stories are what fanfiction was meant for.

In other news: I feel it necessary to mention that the words 'emo corner' have turned me into a babbling fool that is incapable of stopping the laughter. Curse you!
Skittles the Sugar Fairy
2007-05-22 . chapter 5
... I like Avrice. Its makes me giggle. The fact that there's plot behind the insanity is always a pick me up. This is just really neat. I love them both...sigh, I kinda like emo-Zim, he amuses me.
Desdemona Kakalose
2007-05-22 . chapter 5
i thought it was pretty funny actually. but how is he alive after his ...like... second brain was fried?
TicTac
2007-05-22 . chapter 5
Good to see an update, also good to see Zim didn't kill himself.
Invader Sideos
2007-05-22 . chapter 5
WOOP!

Tis an awesome chapter with Zim being emo and trying all those emo-tastic ways of death.

And of course, Dib came in all awesome and whatnot and not giving a damn cos Zim is like a cockroach. (Love that line.)

Anyways, tis awesome, update soon dammit!
LabbySidhe
2007-04-26 . chapter 4
Excellent little fic you have here! This is hilariously good. Somewhat short, but hey, it's still worth it. On a side note, I do believe I know what the JTHM line is: "It's a beautiful night. I think I'll kill myself." Technically, Nny said, "Oh, it's such a beautiful night," but I think that that counts as the same, doesn't it? It's in the first comic, where Nny goes suicidal but Nailbunny tries to convince him not to. n_n Then he gets distracted by the family diarrhea!! I loves my Nny stuffs. Can't wait for an update!
Vesme
2007-03-26 . chapter 4
*Gasp* Noes! Zimmy!

Well Dib better damn well rescue him!! (And kiss his emo away? Why, Dib wouldn't electrocute Zim again would he?? Hehe)
Extraintrovert
2007-03-16 . chapter 4
"And since you can't really send sticky notes through space, that meant calling them"

Don't feel robbed of the funee, because it's all here for those willing to look for it. There are so many golden lines here, and unlike previous chapters they're a lot more subtlely placed (though that still makes them horribly obvious). As is par for the course for your stories, it is rushed and leaves a lot to the reader's imaginations, but not only aren't they necessarily bad, but it fits well with the abject confusion Zimmy is experiencing. Anticipation is a mild way to describe my feelings towards this.

Oh, and for future reference, Zim IS a girl. I know what all the characters say, but the mood swings are too much of a giveaway for me to ignore. They are unignorable!

I… wish I could add more to this review, but you know how it is *shuffles feet*
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