Awesome work! Keep it up^^ /cheer

This is great, can't wait for the next one!

Haha, oh wow. A trans-species/gendered mithra and a narcoleptic red mage up against the world. What could possibly go wrong? Seriously, though, very original take on a common theme, and though your minor mispellings have been pointed out frequently, they're just that, minor, nothing that cannot be refined over time. Keep up the good work.

I must say that you write exptemely well, as stated previously. You're ideas maybe are the most original thus far, but you still make it interesting and not as lame as, unfortunately, many other fics are.

Only thing I can critize has been stated already as well, there are just a few lil typos, though, I think one thing needs brought to your attention: Groove: Like, a groove in wood or something, or that music has a nice groove. Grove: The apple grove had nice shade. Pitiful examples but I'm sure you get the idea =P

Anyways, I'm excited to see more of this story ^-^

Haha, a great chapter. Seems liek the red mage could use some coffee, no?

Keep up the great work ^-^

Great fic, definitely going onto my favorites. Keep up the great work!

I really enjoyed this story so far, hope that you continue on with it, you made a concept that could have turned out really average, into something unique and interesting to read. Keep it up :)

Interesting story you have going here which so far I am enjoying. They only thing I can think of to comment on at them moment is that you should probably find yourself a proofreader as there are a few misspellings and places where you use a similar-sounding, but incorrect word. Other then that, keep up the good work and I look forward to your next chapter!

Good story, but if once a month is all you can handle, you are hopeless.

Still fantastic!

That was amazing. Simply awesome. Keep it up!

Hehe.. nice setup so far. Can't wait to read more.

Do you have a beta reader?

The lack of reviews here disturbs me greatly. You're doing an excellent job of a self-insert here, with an original take on how such a thing would happen. ( at no point did an awesumz sUgAr-y drink spill onto your PC/PS2, along with poorly-explained plot device #5867, land you in Vana'diel.) Your angle is original, please keep going.