Lovely story!

Oh, I love the end!

"Are you sure Elizabeth knows?”

That's great...

I loved your story, it stays true to the original work while adding new plot twists, great job!
The changes you made in the dialogues are barely perceptible, and if I have to pick one thing I didn't like, it would be that you skipped the "in a more gentelman like manner" part of the refusal. It's my favorite line in the whole story, and the one I think hurt him the most when he thought of it... but hey! that's just me. It was overall great.

I love how this is in Darcy's point of view. I dislike Caroline so much!

Excellent!

I am enjoying the story so far, but have to point out a couple of things... Sir William Lucas should be refered to as Sir William or his full name, NEVER Sir Lucas!!
Lady Catherine should be Aunt Catherine NOT Aunt De Bourgh.
Apart from these slips your adaptation so far is enjoyable and entertaining.

nice...

awesome awesome story!

Humm.. Interesting..

I like how your story's almost identical to the actual, yet from a totally different point of view.

I would have love to read what Charles had in mind when Darcy confessed his feelings for Elizabeth. XD

a nice ending to the story, even though we all knew it was heading toward this anyways. interested in seeing a sequel!

I thoroughly enjoyed this, it was a refreshing character study into Mr. Darcy's personality. This was fun to read, you did a wonderful job!

Very enjoyable. I liked the other POV.

I like this so far...Guess I'll have to see how it pans out!

WOW! OMC! I LOVE IT! AWESOME! AMAZING! PERFECT! And all the words that can describe how incredible and wonderful you wrote this!! I love it!!^^ You made them kiss!! YEAH!! Thank you so much! And you really got a perfect ending! Your fanfiction of P&P is the best I've ever read!! XD I'm looking forward to the sequel! Hurry up! I really want to read more! SEQUEL!! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! It'll be amazing, too!^^ LOVE IT!^^