Ha, "When in doubt, knock Ed out!" It's so true. XD

I'm real excited to see what happens next.

This is very good, but watch you spelling...that's it...my only suggestion. 'Course you were probably in a rush since you hadn't updated in so long...I do that a lot.

Wow, very hardcore but I simply loved It. And usually I don't really enjoy morbid plots and stoy lines but, what the heck! I fell In love!

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woah...

thats hardcore

cant wait to read the rest!

awesome start. It's really good. can't wait to read more