I'm not sure if I'm misinterpreting this, but if you're trying to show how insane Samus has actually become, it was quite eerily well done. It wasn't cold to the point of being stereotypical but at the same time it also wasn't stupidly maniacal.

"This work of art is proof that I have not lost a single shred of sanity. I am more in control of my mind than ever, and as you can see, I have plenty to say. That is my first reason for writing this: so that you will see how sane I still am."

That's an excellent line, really.

Admittedly though, the story in itself was a bit dull. I like how she was talking about killing Ridley as though it were done on a regular basis, and she expresses how much her life has been changed with just a mere pinch of salt, but the whole thing where she talks to the reader and tells him/her how he/she is going to die is just a bit... bland. I'd elaborate further but I can't really explain why.

This would be good as a standalone, I don't think you need to update for the full impact. Good work nonetheless.

This sounds MUCH more like Samus than anything else that I have read. This is pretty good. You should next write about her hatred for the Space Pirates and then the suit.

Astonishing! You really got inside Samus' Character.
I am fully pleased at this work and I demand more chapters (XD)
I'm going to fav this, this has potential! Keep it up!

Very good! I like the way it was written. O... *looks outside* I'm now worried 0_o

But that sounded like her, albeit more deadly than I imagine her. But I guess she would have to be like that to face the things she's seen.

This is very good. Nice job at keeping with the character.

Yeah, you'd absolutely have to be inspired to write something this good.

Everything about it-vocabulary, structure, attitude-sounds like pure Samus. I'm interested. Very interested.

im really interested to see where your taking this. i wonder if your stories going to be a recital of samus's life (and therefore all the games) or if its going to pan into a guys perspective and struggle to survive.
this is very gripping, and i hope to see this story get all the reveiws it deserves.

This is really gripping and is a very fair portrayal of Samus.

Please update, for her challenger awaits!

WOW, that was a really good first chapter. Even from the first line, it draws you in. I think you are writing in Samus' voice really well, too. Really good job! *favs*

Wow, that was quite interesting.

It was very realistic, for the most part, as far as how Samus might sound.

The description is also very catchy. Something about seeing "it is the story of your death" made me want to read it. Great writing.

Wow. That was the most mind-boggling piece I've read on here.

I don't know much about Metroid, except the basic plot outline. I never really read any of your serious work, so I decided to.

Whoa... I'm really impressed at this. I think this is going on my alerts just to see where this will go.

But, the way Samus describes the win-lose thing is actually depressing in a way. I mean... that's what its all about. I never really saw life that way. It's really actually... Robotic.

Ooh.
So, Samus finally finished off Ridley. Nice.
But...uh, who is the reader and why does Samus want to kill him/her/it?

Samus isn't better than me!
Oh yeah, not much to say about this chapter; I agree.
Yeah, good intro?
Kool.

GGooeeyy