OMG please update. I HAVE to read more. I feel so sorry for Elphie :(

I like the story i think there should be more detal, like there was at the end of the chapter... How many nicknames can Elphaba have, no it is ok i like it not many people could have pulled of another nickname (cough cought me) but you did and it works! I like it!

aw this story is too cute!
can't wait for more!!

Okay, I know it's a sad topic, so I can't be too cruel, but there are some major issues in this story -

This is Oz, I don't believe they have all the modern science we do. Expecially not chemotherapy. Actually, there was nothing to imply cancer or other human diseases at all in the book or musical.

Your grammar needs some work - Elphie is not spelled Eliphe. Waist is different than waste. Commas and semicolons are useful.

Elphaba's mother hated her, she would never have given her a stuffed dragon. Nor would Elphaba cuddle said dragon.

So um..sorry. But it needed to be said

oh that is cool! A little less drama and a little more just light talking, ibelieve will help the story. I know it is a dramatic sitiuation but dimming it down a bit will be for the better of the story. That is just my opinion, take it or leave it. I love it!

poor elphie! In a way stupid elphie!

i love it! but elphaba's mother hated her. but i lovethe story! Gemme More! I really like this! -alerted-favortied-

uh oh.
that was one hectic chaper ;)

i love the stories that you write! are all of them going to be based on sickness?

This has so much potential, but before you continue I would suggest brushing up on her grammar and spelling. :^)
Example:
"In here, Fiyero” Glinda said. Fiyero noticed the vomit and the floor by Elphaba’s bed and went to the bathroom to find the two girls in their bathroom with Elphaba vomiting into the toilet with Glinda stroking her hair."
- This sentence is awkward; try to make your wording less redundant i.e., you don't need to say bathroom twice.