Hiron;

I'm not sure where you are going with this one...I think that the Companions would have never let Shored leave Valdemar or the Collegium until he/they were completely healed. (In the ML Universe anyway...) The undiscovered country is an interesting premise, however, I think that maybe it could have been explained (ML CANNON) as a result of the change circles bringing in a new city...or part of one..in keeping with the timeline from after the mage storms. And they could have come from...THE FUTURE?--lol

MsChief

Hiro;

You're my hero and I haven't even started reading it yet...I really wanted to know what was going to happen to Shored.

Giggles as my boss asks what I'm doing today.

Mschief

In ordinary circumstances Tenre's leaving would be a healthy thing, but this situation is far from ordinary. Will he really leave? I know, wait for next chapter to find out!! Thanks for this chapter, and please hurry with the next!!

Man...this is turning out so cool...but poor Tenri! He's so sweet...he shouldn't have to go...

Laters,

KD

Aw, how cute! They're in love! I wonder if Tenri was talking about his Self fading from within the three way bonded mind? Anyway, this is very interesting and I hope you WRITE MORE SOON!

Is that even plausible? Reincarnation into the same person? Because I seriously doubt that could happen to a lifebonded pair, or in this case, three-way lifebond. Besides, Stef and Tylendel were supposed to share the same soul. 'Lendel came and implied that to Vanyel himself. So forgive me for considering this scenario a little... doubtful. And since I am a devoted fan of the Van-Stef-'Lendel bond...

Interesting plot development! I would have never pegged the mind-trio to be Vanyel-Tylendel-Stefan, but it does make a sort of sense. So far, this is highly interesting. One question: you never explained why the people of Tansho weren't in the city when the explorers found it. Other then that, this seems really good and I can't wait to read more! Basically, GOOD JOB and WRITE MORE SOON!

This story has so many things going on, some of it still in the background. I love it!! I can't wait to see how things unfold!! Thank you for writing, and please post another chapter soon.

hmm, very unusual.

I like the amount of detail that you have placed, both with the party as well as the city.

I look forward to reading more.

This is an interesting story - your characters are good. Please don't wait too long to update!!

...er...there's a place in the beginning of the chapter that says, 'insert horse-saddling stuff here'. I'm sure you didn't mean for that to happen, so...yep.

Other than that, it was a completely awesome chapter. I'm hooked.

*sits intrigued* It's like...dammit, Misty! Oh, I wish that fans could start writing novels in the series...you'd be one of the top!

Laters,

KD

::sighs:: whats not to love, at least my namesake gets his own story. EVen if he is straight...UPDATE SOON!

I can't wait to read more, This sounds really intresting.

Huh...funky...I like this! ^_^ Poor boys...that had to have hurt!

laters,

KD