I always love it when writers realize that InuYasha is smarter compared to what others think. Cute story!

Ooh gosh... That made me cry like crazy. You have a way of writing that make readers really 'think' about the many different aspects of things.
Bravo. I enjoyed! :)

Ashley Vu

Aw, I liked it! Really makes you think about the things that are going on in the manga, you also kept everyone well in character. Great job! Made my eyes water!

Sweet ending, very sincere throughout. I enjoyed this, for the sense of peace it gave me as well-because the words apply beyond this situation-comfortable doesn't equal happy. Good job knowing how much to say, and how much to leave unsaid, simply hinted at or subtly or metaphorically discussed...Because those things were just as important, if not more important, than the rest. Trust Kagome to think of herself as selfish for wondering if her love can ever be fully returned. Very well done.

I think your story gives a good and realistic look into Kagome's prespective

i swear you write the best one shots out there! :)

loved it. thank you for writing.

I like it!

Hmm,I thought I already reviewed this! Oh well, anyway I loved this it was so good!

beautiful wonderful job :)



- Athena

Oi, I loved it! It made me feel so bad for Kikyou. I was like thinking about her life, and how sad I would be if I were in that position. But then I thought about how she could've said no...and it was kinda her own fault...but still, it was so super sad! I almost felt bad for hating her...almost. Well, I loved it. It was really well-written.

im also updated with the manga and this really changed my perspective on the way things are going in the manga(Im on chapter 516)_Anyway great job on the fic!

3 words. I.LOVE.IT! =} it was soo good. I almost had tears in my eyes. Cant wait for the next chapter.

that was so cute!

good job! I loved that story and I loved your confessions of b a broken heart trilogy as weell. Please wrtie a fourth chaptered story to the the triology!