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| rozzy07 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this reflective piece, loved the open dialogue dialogue between the brothers most esp the ending: > if all Hell really did break loose, that Sam would be one to turn the evil into something good; that Sam and John would somehow find a way to come back and haunt him.> Seriously this is what I hope for and to see it put so succinctly put into words was a treasure itself. |
| Rae Artemis 2007-02-01 ch 1, | abuse“How often do you have to hustle the police and steal their clothes?” I love that line, it is so believable! And I laugh out loud reading it, it is just funny. I love this story as it has a great mix of humour and drama. The last paragraph is brilliant and I hope, a bit truthful that even if Sam is slated for evil he'll make good instead. |
| phoebe 2007-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou do realize that "ron" wasplayed by Chris Gauthier NOT Jorge Garcia who plays "hurley" |
| Poaetpainter 2007-02-01 ch 1, | abuse"when his brother mourned it only came out like this; in short but strong doses." I was nodding in agreement. |