So far, I am finding this story very amusing. please continue. By the way, have you read the seventh book? If so, I cant wait to see how you incorporate Snape and Lily's story into yours. this should prove to be a very interesting fanfic. Good luck. And regardless of weather or not it turns out to be kick-ass or shitty beyond reason, i will still enjoy reading.

that is a great plot
i love it a lot
please continue because
I want to know what is going
to happen