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JanieJoy'sTicklish 8/4/10 . chapter 1
Awah! That's so sweet! I love KankiSaku just cause they seem so different. But, they are a good different.
Ayame Ryuukaru 2/8/09 . chapter 1
Lol. Aw. Sakura is so cute in this. XD, nice way of combining Sake and Sakura.
sophia666 1/14/09 . chapter 1
I loved Kankurou, who was surprisingly sweet, and Sakura with her forehead complex and drunkeness. Great writing. I specially loved-

“You’re drunk,” she accuses suddenly, and thrusts the bottle into his face. “You drank all this saké.”

“You drank it.”

The pink-haired woman seems to hesitate. “So…” she leans forward a bit more, setting the bottle on the table. “-you’re not drunk?”

He shakes his head.

“And you think I’m pretty?”

Kankurou meets her inquisitive gaze. He knows nothing about her besides her name, her profession, that she is nineteen years old, and has a complex about the size of her forehead. They’re sharing drinks by pure coincidence and she’s so slobbering drunk that she’s thinks Rock Lee is handsome. Still, she is pretty with her pale skin and sweet face, small nose and dark pink mouth; he likes her voice and how small her hand is compared to his own. “Yes,” he replies, and gently removes his hand from her forehead.

He is rewarded with a smile.
Shaitanah 11/14/08 . chapter 1
Poor Sakura, still having complexes about her forehead. It's not that bad after all) And I'm glad Kankurou can see that. Sweet story!
ember007 11/15/07 . chapter 1
cute
C 10/25/07 . chapter 1
Aw. That was so sweet!
Imbrii 7/13/07 . chapter 1
The more I re-read this the more I like it. You took a crack pairing and made it -work-, you took the premise of alcohol and it didn't turn into OOC insta-sex.

I'd say more about how I love the characterization, especially Sakura, and all the little things you sneak in there, but I don't feel articulate enough.
SakuraUmeTheDeadSheNinja 7/3/07 . chapter 1
nice story it was KAWAII! - I loved it... Sakura was funny... but I like the point.. you can like someone you dont kno
Lovely Spell 5/12/07 . chapter 1
a big "chewy...gummy..thing on the... inside" huh?... well in that case *nibble* *nibble* *lick* ...yeah that would be gummy alright... i don't like girlxboy fics but i decided to read it anyways and i don't regret it at all...even though sakura is my eternal rival... i don't hate this fic at all... :D
pyro-witch2 5/2/07 . chapter 1
YES! i agree! Kankurou IS a big chewy thing! inside... in his heart... i love him
GuloGulo 3/31/07 . chapter 1
That's a funny name you have ... hee. But a really good fic nonetheless!

-Sabaku No Izumi
ginny7777 3/30/07 . chapter 1
oh, not a fan of the pairing but very cutsie!
YourAngelStandingBy 3/19/07 . chapter 1
Aw, how cute!

-Angel
Rejoiced Inferiority 3/18/07 . chapter 1
AH YOU ARE EATING KANKUROU-KUN?
n00b-masta2112 2/21/07 . chapter 1
Yes, Kankuro may be a big chewy gummy thing on the inside, but he is also a HUGE chewy gummy thing on the outside...wow that came out REALLY wrong...
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