So that's the origin of the whistle! Hehe, anyway, cute fic. I like it. BL13 out!

Very cute. I loved it. His behavor fitted the age you were going for. It was cute that he wanted that whistle so bad. I wonder now how Hikari got it. I didn't really see any mistakes. I wish I could write without mistakes. Anyway cute story I loved it. Wait I already said that. Nevermind. I'm gonna stop writing my rant now.

Aww that was really kewl. I really liked that story. The origin of the whistle.

uh-oh! Tai stole Kari's whistle! so that's how she got it! Tai was a bad big brother! i bet when they get older Tai will feel guilty and eventualy Kari will find out how he got it for her! she'll be mad at him!