Very fluffy and cute, short and sweet, nice and simple.

Cute. I love Smellershot Fluff . And Smellershotians for the win. :)

Aw how sweet! I love this pairing and truthfully as soon as I read when the working woman person said "What can I do for you three handsome young men?" I was like "O, not good." Lol.

Keep up the great work! You should write a lot more Smellershot stories. XD

Taylor

Dah! That was so cute. The inn keeper was a hoot- "Give me money and I'm all smiles!" XD

Very sweet. Smellershot love is always nice.

Aw! That was cute. Love Smellershot.

Aw! Despite that little scene with Iroh, I hadn't really thought about the everyday stuff for her. Thanks for thinking and writing about it.

Aw that was so sweet! Loved this story!

Can you continue this? I loved IT!

Ah, a change is pairing. I like it! I love how Longshot is so confident and stuff. Awesome job. You're right; there is a little bit of Smellershot in all of us!

That was cute. :)

You did a great job of this! The word choice and descriptions fit the mood well, especially towards the end. The Smellershot was so sweet and dead-on. And you say this is one of your first times writing it? Good job!

aww...

that was very fluffy!

:)

I liked it!

aw... that is so *sniff* sweet!

i saw that comin' a mile away, let me tell you...

this isn't really advice or criticism or whatever the he-eck

these reviews are for, but i think that if smellerbee grew out her hair and maybe wore a dress, people might think she's a girl...

Very cute! I'm not much of a Smellershot shipper (I prefer Toph with Longshot xD) but this is one of the few that I actually enjoy. Fave'd, by the way!

-Pixie

Aww...love it! It's so characteristically Freedom Fighters, and don't worry about a thing...you got the Smellershot dead on! The moment kind of comes out of nowhere, and it really helps things...great job!

Yours truly,

The Pterodactyl