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| Jokerina 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseHmm, I liked this story. It made me sad, and I don't mean that in a bad way, it got me in the mood and I really felt for Harley. I love your stories, well, the ones that I've read and I don't think I've ever had anything to complain about, but now is the day. I would love it if you could read about what happened when joker got home and found his Harlequin. That is the only thing that could make this story better then it already is. That's all :) |
| James Birdsong 2007-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseQuite good |
| Q2 2006-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuse(Sitting in a Dark roo an the floor only ligh is from the lighting storm out side) I love it it describes how a us humans, petie, cowardly yes we are but to describe how much we can love is on of our good points. Don't feel bad little kiddies she's in a better world one where she can be happy Idea what if the ghost still lingers hm Two choces One answer What would you do What who you choose? |
| Gothic Gryphon 2006-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseHon, this is a brilliant take on how Harley Quinn must have felt throughout her relationship with the Joker- AND throughout her life. Let's face it, no one gets into her position over night, and you convayed that brilliantly in one short, excellent chapter. |
| Roach 2002-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou're gonna make my keyboard blow up. It's drenched in tears! You certainly have a way with words |
| Dark Chaos1 2002-06-04 ch 1, | abuseSo sad. Going in my favorites list. Dark Chaos |
| Lara13 2001-07-09 ch 1, | abuseOh my God!!! That was so beautiful and poetic and you really touched Harley's emotions. I can see her killing herself over the Joker (unfortunately)and the way you descibed how she felt was amazing. I loved it and I hope to read more by you soon. :-) |
| E Kelly 2001-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThis just makes me ache for Harley. It is so sad to see someone willfully destroy themselves and push the blame on another (for once it isn't the Joker's fault). She even says it at the last - she has the power and throws it away "so loving him will be my death" - but her choice, because it's her choice to love him when he is who he is. |
| D.K. Archer 2001-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseOooh...you either have a great imagination or you've actually felt like this, because you got the emotion down perfect. It's a great peice, but you might want to change what kind of pills she's taking. Aspirin is one of those things that takes FOREVER to die from. |