that was the cutest thing ever!! it would be awesome if you continued it but it's really good how it is now! i just loved everything about it!

I really like your envisioning of the end of the war, especially Toph becoming queen of Omashu, it's good to be king (or queen in this instance).

I like the whole sudden but subtle romance of the whole story, you do well with pre-defined love and subtle romance. The long years of Toph waiting to be with Katara, and then the anxiety of having to wait to know if she'd come back with her made me very sad though.

All-in-all very good story, you are truly a talented KaToph writer and I just hope when I finally get around to writing a KaToph that I write it as well as you do.


~Rabbidfangirl

verry good u should go furhter make it more than a 1 shot

well that was awesome!:D write more!

~Rain Addict_CM

I enjoyed reading this. I only wish it was longer.

Very fluffy, and very sweet. I love the way you keep all the characters in the story so very un-ooc. You, my friend, are one incredible author. -Nods-
~*~F-M-K-O~*~

Another fantastic story. You can officially call me your number one fan as of now. ^^

Such a wonderful story!

sad, sweet, touching, and i guess a happy ending make it good! love happy ending, who doesnt?

Very cute story, I like it. And I have to say, Toph as Bumi's successor is an interesting idea I haven't heard before.

Great fanfic! ^-^

Good stuff, a great companion to the pic (which I hoped someone would do something for, it's great). Good twists at the end, really enjoyable. BTW, I have episode two playing in the background right now, and Avatars are told they're the Avatar when they turn 16, FYI. Tho I understand why the girl needs to know sooner ^_^

Lovely little story. I love your Katophs.

Aww, that was wonderful~

Heh, like a few others said... I wish this wasn't a oneshot. I mean, it has potential to make a very good multi-chapter fic.

Aw, it was so cute... but sad... and yet cute! Hehehe, poor Kailas. I liked it quite a lot, really, it would have made a great chaptered story. But oh well, it's still cool. Btw... I kind of forgot if I reviewed third chapter of "Ye Chang Meng Duo", gotta check...
Anyway, gotta go, great story!