poor jasper

charliex

Poor Jasper. Beautifully written!

Really good, :)

poor poor jasper. as you can see, i have truly nothing better to do. (that is any fun at all) ama

hehe, loved it, love jasper

That was awesome I loved it.

Stephenie Meyer you mean! If you love her so much then can't you at least get her name right?

He hates the boys locker room so much that he considers leaving just to escape it? Wow.

P'sahw you silly highschool boys! Pale men are hot!

Emmett has me cracking up right now. Here he is taking about basketball and "use[ing] any form of rocks as weapons" in the same sentence. hilarious!

That was excellent, LindaRoo. I think you got Jasper's thoughts very nicely!

I am not in a mood to write an essay, so I shall just write a paragraph. Just let me say, you did Jasper's point of view wonderfully. You gave him that attention to detail, that seriousness, that acknowledgement of their problems they have pushing on them every second. That is how I like to write male vampire point of views. I'm not sure if female vampires would feel the same, because I've never written a female vampire point of view. Poor Jasper... with emotions frothing around him like an ocean... an ocean of fried chicken he's not allowed to eat... even though he's starving... he gets the meatless version... which I find delicious anyway.

Lia

Thrushflight

Stalker of Edward

oh...poor jasper. he's tries so hard...yet he can barely succeed.

he will learn.

and in the meantime, please write more! Please?

VERY good! i wish there was more D

the descriptions of Jasper and his relationship with Alice was very good!

GReat Job!

that was really good. _ please write more, if not on this story, the please write another one *adds story & author to faves & alerts*

very well written.

well done

my favourite jasper story by far!

Retta

I like it, and how you portrayed everyone, and everything. Good job...

poor jasper