|Reviews for Jasper in Gym|
| Bradhadair fire starter 3/10/08 . chapter 1
| unorthodox yo-yo 3/10/08 . chapter 1
Poor Jasper. Beautifully written!
| I'm.Forbidden.Fruit 3/8/08 . chapter 1
Really good, :)
| ama-chan13 3/8/08 . chapter 1
poor poor jasper. as you can see, i have truly nothing better to do. (that is any fun at all) ama
| Belle07 3/5/08 . chapter 1
hehe, loved it, love jasper
| blutak 3/4/08 . chapter 1
That was awesome I loved it.
| LivforLove 3/2/08 . chapter 1
Stephenie Meyer you mean! If you love her so much then can't you at least get her name right?
He hates the boys locker room so much that he considers leaving just to escape it? Wow.
P'sahw you silly highschool boys! Pale men are hot!
Emmett has me cracking up right now. Here he is taking about basketball and "use[ing] any form of rocks as weapons" in the same sentence. hilarious!
| NoMoreThanUsual 2/27/08 . chapter 1
That was excellent, LindaRoo. I think you got Jasper's thoughts very nicely!
| The Thrush That Can't Fly 2/26/08 . chapter 1
I am not in a mood to write an essay, so I shall just write a paragraph. Just let me say, you did Jasper's point of view wonderfully. You gave him that attention to detail, that seriousness, that acknowledgement of their problems they have pushing on them every second. That is how I like to write male vampire point of views. I'm not sure if female vampires would feel the same, because I've never written a female vampire point of view. Poor Jasper... with emotions frothing around him like an ocean... an ocean of fried chicken he's not allowed to eat... even though he's starving... he gets the meatless version... which I find delicious anyway.
Stalker of Edward
| Ms. Topaz 2/23/08 . chapter 1
oh...poor jasper. he's tries so hard...yet he can barely succeed.
he will learn.
and in the meantime, please write more! Please?
| Winterbirdie 1/11/08 . chapter 1
VERY good! i wish there was more D
the descriptions of Jasper and his relationship with Alice was very good!
| dawning beauty 1/4/08 . chapter 1
that was really good. _ please write more, if not on this story, the please write another one *adds story & author to faves & alerts*
| Retta Cullen i wish 12/31/07 . chapter 1
very well written.
my favourite jasper story by far!
| dyingimmortal 12/23/07 . chapter 1
I like it, and how you portrayed everyone, and everything. Good job...
| Selonianth 12/20/07 . chapter 1