i loved the 'just say no' part. XD please make more rinxarcher!! XD

Great story please update soon

... well this is interesting... well please continue... I wonder if Archer will complete his mission... well please continue...

i admit that was not my favorite, but its was good

update soon

A+, WOULD LOL AGAIN

By the Gods! If only I could draw people. I would soo draw Saber clinging to Archer calling for Rin to save him while attempting to flee from Saber's oh so powerful molestation-hug. Gods Archer has become the prince in distress and his savior Rin, the princess in shining armor and as for Saber, she will be the bad-girl-who-continually-attempts-to-liberate-Archer-from-his-clothes. LOL.

I love this chapter! Keep'em comming. Your greatness. *I worship you*

very nice

over all this fic is very will written, and the first few chapters use some of the best word play i have seen in sometime

as for this chapter its was a good laugh

update soon

wow

just read the first chapter and i am already impressed

I came, I giggled, and LOL'ed

Fun things to write for chapter 10 for season's road thanks to this lovely inspiration...

Adorable-- really Saber deserves some yum yum time with an actual man instead of a little boy.

And Sakura sweetie-- go for Lancer or Rider and save yourself the heartache.

That was the funniest thing!!
*Rin*you looked so terrified of this tiny little girl coming onto you.
*Archer*a tiny little girl with a great big glowing sword.
*bursts out laughing*
keep it up!=^.^=

LOL. Loved the STARTING line. I can so "see" it happening in my mind.

Thanks... this chapter practically brighten my day. :)

Kind of weird but very unny but next chapter can you make one where Saber finds out of Archer's identity but a serious one

This is funny especially the wedding one. ^_^ One more chapter please.

This is really good food for thought. So deep. So emotional. So hilarious at the same time. Keep writing!