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Reviews for: Aisle Eighteen
steadfast
2009-12-01 . chapter 1
CUTE.
Kamikashi
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
Nice!
Reynolds' first name is Albert btw...
Bunnylass
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
Ugh, I suck for not reviewing this before! I saved it in my faves, but never commented on just how light, adorable and perfect it was! :D

So let me say it now...

It's brilliant and so, so, so THEM! Hehe! I loved it! Good job! :D
MuseUrania
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
Nicely done. ;)
reesa
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
I like lonely-star83's idea. You should definitely add two 'other point of view chapters' and Jack thinking he's all sly and Sam laughing because Jack think's he's all sly. The cake idea was very cute. Great job.
BettyHall223
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
Cute story. Jack and Sam finally together!
Ilovesg1
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
Very nice. And, funny that they are kissing in the 'cake' mix aisle. So appropriate.
Nikki
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
Very cute - loved it. Like the way you wrote Reynolds and his wife. :)
Aria-wolfstar
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
Hahaa, adorable :D Loved it!
(The cake part was hilarious!)
-Aria
lonely-star83
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
it'd be cool if you write the same story from Jack and Sam point of view :D
Natters
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
snicker. good fun
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