 steadfast 2009-12-01 . chapter 1CUTE. |
 Kamikashi 2008-11-22 . chapter 1Nice!
Reynolds' first name is Albert btw... |
 Bunnylass 2008-10-26 . chapter 1Ugh, I suck for not reviewing this before! I saved it in my faves, but never commented on just how light, adorable and perfect it was! :D
So let me say it now...
It's brilliant and so, so, so THEM! Hehe! I loved it! Good job! :D |
 MuseUrania 2007-02-02 . chapter 1Nicely done. ;) |
 reesa 2007-02-02 . chapter 1 I like lonely-star83's idea. You should definitely add two 'other point of view chapters' and Jack thinking he's all sly and Sam laughing because Jack think's he's all sly. The cake idea was very cute. Great job. |
 BettyHall223 2007-02-02 . chapter 1Cute story. Jack and Sam finally together! |
 Ilovesg1 2007-02-02 . chapter 1Very nice. And, funny that they are kissing in the 'cake' mix aisle. So appropriate. |
 Nikki 2007-02-02 . chapter 1 Very cute - loved it. Like the way you wrote Reynolds and his wife. :) |
 Aria-wolfstar 2007-02-02 . chapter 1Hahaa, adorable :D Loved it!
(The cake part was hilarious!)
-Aria |
 lonely-star83 2007-02-02 . chapter 1it'd be cool if you write the same story from Jack and Sam point of view :D |
 Natters 2007-02-02 . chapter 1snicker. good fun |