It is good, is this an Eragon x Saphira style poem? If so...thank you so much for going against the norm of Eragon x Mutagh (shudders) or Eragon x Araya (that one isn't bad)
Nice work

Wow...this is...good...and oddly fitting of two characters that have been broiling in my mind for a while now...

Are you a mind reader?

Why didnt u tell me that you were so good at writing you meanie... I only have one question... Who is it about I dont really know who perpective it is from... But other than that IT IS SO COOL!

Luv ya Sis
DevilSister