one of the reasons i like the barty tri so much is because it is a mix of hp and af and i want to read some more of your work it's awesome soz for bad spelling and grammar

You did SO well doing the part of bartimaeus, kitty, and nat. I was so sad when nat died and i think you did very well making this story!

Omg! I loved it! I so wish this was the real ending to the book!

omg hahahahaha "Of course he had u stupid potato" *rofl* That had me cracking up!
I really like this story!! *goes on to read the rest of the chapters*

Hello! CC here, from the EC forum. Just thought I'd say I like you're story... especially the foot notes!

Awsome!!





-An apple away keeps the doctor at bay, if well aimed.

That was so good! It was such a fluffly fanfic and I loved it! The ending was perferct!

I really liked it!

Hey! Nice job.
eh Kity in this story is still young or old like she should be?...ya know for better image... :-)

Ah, finally a happy ending, just sad that they didn't summon Bartimaeus to the wedding. He would of loved to hear the last name then... Nathaniel probably wouldn't... ;)
I must say this was very well written and I most definitely will read some more of you're story's.
And didn't I mention I loved the happy ending?

wow! i like it alot! ok, so im not going to do the whole chapter by chapter review cuz that would take so long but ill say this: i really like the way this story started out with Nat not being dead, i never thought he deserived to die, and i like the way him and Kitty got together and all. so ya, haha thats the longest review i have ever made...

I really love your story! Ur style is great and you wrote this story very realitically! It just seems as if the author actually continued writing this story. Thanks a lot for writing this story, I always wanted the story to continue and I didn't want it to end this heartbreaking!!

GREAT story!

Oh. Well, it DOES fit well... STILL GREAT WRITING!

Wow! Nice way of keeping him alive! I was sort of disappointed when Kitty didn't search through the ruins when she saw them burn down. I thought "At LEAST look through them!! He might be ALIVE!" But she didn't. And you kept him alive. NICE!

All together now...aw