One word, beautiful.

Oh, that was so sad! But so well written! Your description of the battle field was excellent and I could really feel Gunter's emotions coming through. WELL DONE!

I thought you did a very good job capturing the char of Gunter, even though I don't believe it ever mentioned he ever had a lover, but then it never said it didn't, ne? Words were used very well to paint a very clear picture, which I'd say was quite good considering English isn't your first language. I look forward to reading any more that you do, and I've always loved all the KKM characters and their little quirks. Oh, and interesting employing what I call the 'buttworm' from sex pistols ;p

Mistakes forgivable when obscured with wonderful things such as this! _are

Waah*sniffles*. You did an awesome job. Though a little OOC, that's good sometimes. After all, you can't always have Gunter prancing around like a fairy on constant crack ;

You're right, there's not enough fanfics of these two.

that's my favourite pairing as well!

i didnt like gunter falling in love with an average person...it just wouldn't ever happen...surely.

but i liked the kind of poetry the story had.

i think you have a really good talent for writing, but maybe you could benefit from getting someone to edit before posting?

overall, thank you.

(: )(..)( :)('')(: )(..)( :)('')(: )(..)( :)('')(: ).../o/

hmm where to start :z besides cherry's awesome engrish : Firstly you didn't introduce the narrating character thats talking, but I guess thats not important cause he isn't the focus of the fic. Also I don't know anything about Kyou Kara Maou soo... _;

Your description of Celeriac Von Larkspur is a bit weird :z I don't know how to explain; but it feels kind of weird compared to the rest of the story ._.

For the laast part, I like how you describe how Gunter von Christ's pureness/brilliance etc etc is stained walking through the blood and stuff. You did a nice job of conveying the emotion and stuff of his sadness etc there but the next part is disgusting

Nice. Though i dont know what you wrote but nice :D

you are amazing with words...nothing more i can say...

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god...

i was crying in the end of the fic.. this is the good stuff

i hope you'll do more in the future

This story is very pretty, it had be sniffling by the end... You put a lot of emotion into it, and it's lovely because of it...

There are a few mistakes, just as you mentioned, but all in all this story was wonderfully written... I love your idea of making Gwendal think that our dear Gunter's blood could have been the colour of milk... _ That was sweet...

But the ending was so sad! And that's probably why I love this as much as I do! Not all stories can have a happy ending, and that only makes them more realistic in my opinion...

Again lovely work, and I hope to see more from you... _

- Woffy