THIS IS SO SAD):

When Sirius asked 'can I stay?' it seemed so uncertain! Also when the pull of love and attraction didn't come to Remus when he held Sirius it was just so sad! When you compare all these to what they used to feel and have! You can simply feel that intense sadness in you! I sound kinda dramatic but really! That's how I feel!

I really love how you described all the emotions and how they influenced the characters. For example, Sirius's confused emotions in the beginning and Remus's betrayed, lost emotions when he thought that Sirius was the reason behind Lily, James and Peter's death.

It totally makes sense that Sirius would refuse to be the secret keeper if he thought that Remus was the spy. He will never be able to not tell Remus about Lily and James's location!

The only thing I didn't like was Remus's relationship with his professor. Seriously, his professor? That's just too scandelous and wrong! I was felt that student-teacher relationship were really wrong! Even if they were heterosexual relationships, let alone homosexual relationships! It's just wrong! Also, how Sirius were so unfriendly to Peter during the schooling years. I was always under the impression that The Marauders always completely trusted and liked each other! So for Sirius to not really like Peter was a little out of character of him.

Anyway, you are really a bloody brilliant writer! The ending of chapter 6 was just heartbreaking! The way you described the emotions in Colour of Secrets were equally brilliant as well! It's just more heartbreaking here! So hurry up and update both Colour of Secrets and With Cleansing Breath! Please1:D

Honestly, I've no idea why this doesn't have thousands of reviews. Just finished this part, as far as it is written, and I am in love with the way you portray characters and feelings. The situation feels very real. I hope you keep on writing, but meanwhile I'll move on to reading other things on your profile :)

Ohmy. I love you. It's so realistic. So gay. So damn good. I read all of them, and gave them a name, the "breathes". How creative am I? Now, if anyone ask me about my fav SiRem fics I could say that "the breathes" are on my top list, too:) And I mean it. They werent perfect (of course not because they let things go wrong) but they are still lovely with their feelings and dreams and so much pain... And I can feel them breathing! Thank you!

Is this going to be continued? I hope it's just a hiatus not an abrupt ending to a brilliant story...

I love this story!
It's so realistic and believable.
I totally enjoy your portrayal of Remus and Sirius' personalities. I'm looking forward to future updates!

You're fics are just brilliant! I love how you seem to make the characters more believable and more real than they seem. I also really like how you make the characters analyze almost everything, especially Sirius and Remus and their relationship. I love the dialogue a lot! Keep the brilliance coming!

Ack! Ack! You need to update! Please? I love all this drama. You have a flair for the realistic point of veiw. I like it, you're not all pink ponies and hot bodies. UPDATE!

It's sad that they don't find it easy to be in love anymore but I would kind of expect that you've kept it very real which i really like.
can't wait for it to continue

I like how you have them not in love with each other right now. It's shows that time has passed and they are different people now. They still love the past other, but the current one is a stranger they have yet to know. UPDATE! I hope they fall in love.

This story is just as amazing as the first ones...Poor Remus I can't help but feel so sad for him. I really like the way you write his reactions after Halloween, sad but without overdoing it.
I'm really anxious to read the next part and the confrontation between the two. I just hope they will get together again but that's your job!
well done anyway!

I loved how Remus makes fun of Neville's boggart.
Poor Severus. At least he keeps Remus amused!
Great chapter!
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Great! I like your stuff. You are short where we don´t need any fuss and full of details where needed. Go ahead, I`m looking forward to reading more chapters of this!
(Sorry about my English - I`m not a native speaker)

Poor Moony! UPDATE!

So as it turns out there was a third part. haha

This series has just been getting better and better. Really fantastic. It's sad and real and wonderfully written. So yes, can't wait to see how you take on book 3 from Lupin's perspective.

unrealistic, Remus (as can be inferred in Canon), is the type to stay loyal completely, especially to Sirius.