cute chapter. I liked how it was written.

this was such a cute story! i enjoyed reading all of it, esp. the last chapt. i hope u update soon!

-MET

AW this was such an awesome chapter! SO cute! I loved Mimi's line: "She's got your lungs." LOL! great chapter!

I think you should continue to when the baby is born

I think that you should continue

This is my favorite line: “Maureen?” Joanne’s mother squats beside me. “Picture your body opening up like a beautiful flower,” lol i laughed so hard at that.

great chapter btw. i love how you capture Maureen's thoughts.

i like this, its a cool idea to see how and what Maureen is going through. Good chapter!

Oh, I really liked it! The whole thing was really well written and you defined the Mojo reltionship just right. Please Continue!
~Leia

yes!! please continue!

please continue!

good story, unlike others. just perfect, i cant critisize.!

Please continue, i wanna see her have the baby.
and i loved the part when she puked on Benny's shoes.

You should continue, Maureen in labor is HIGHLY amusing!

~Tina101