Aww i was hoping for an epilogue or a look at the kids growing up :-(

Well while this story did progress fast it was nice and I did enjoy it as it was quite different from the norm. Thank you for writing it.

are you going to add part 2. to the story?

you know 18 years later

please update soon

i have been reading this story and it is cool and i really like it so far and i hope the girl get to keep their babies. Please update soon

i just love the ending of this chapter and how you have Seto and Tea falling in love...

i hope Tea and Seto get to keep her baby...

update

are you going to have Seto fight for Tea?

you know they can be eather bestfriends or he is falling for her...

update soon please and think you

I'm not a big Tea fan, but this story is actually interesting. Who knows? I may be converted to a Tea fan by the time you finish. Haha, just kidding.

Yeah, this is a great story. I like the narrator commentary that you put in there. It's breaks the focus of the story, but not in an obtrusive way like an in-text Author's Note. It's different. Good job and I can't wait to see what happens next.