That was great! Once I started reading, I couldn't stop until the end.

That was amazing! I loved it! It immediately grabbed my attention from the start and kept me totally focused. I would love to read more of your stories!

axel was the one that asked if theyd met before not roxas...

at the beginning u had roxas telling his friends he wanted to take a walk, then he got up and left, then in the next paragraph he was still sitting there watching his friends. i read that over a few times and it was confusing.

You are so right. That scene in Final Mix should have ended with a kiss.

Anyways, I really enjoyed this. It was fun and cute to read. :D

I love it! This is the best reincarnation story I have probably ever heard. For Akuroku anyway, and that's still a very high compliment! Even if it doesn't sound like it. So sorry.

Thank you very, very much for writing this!

LOL! GO SONIC XD! wah *sobs* it's done! wah! lol... this was a really good fic... i love the last few lines especially it was sweet... and i loved roxy's corny line... lol... ugh... it's 2 am here and i'm STILL not tired... oi...

k

umm... you just did something really weird... you had roxas go outside, then magically he's back in the room listening to hayner and olette argue... oops... lol...

Roxas gave a small smile and got up, walking towards the area he had found himself in yesterday.-The blond rested his chin in his hand, staring off into space as Hayner and Olette argued about the rules of paper football. His mind drifted back towards the events of yesterday afternoon.

see? how weird... i thought only movies and i did that... lol...

138 XD nice! lol...

DUDE! N*SYNC! lol... sorry, my music is random... lol XD

LOL GAMESTATION! LOL! gotta love rk and pr they are so good at what they do... lol...

uh... ok... so there must have been a time jump somewhere earlier in the story here... you just forgot to put it in... maybe at what i thought was a mess up? maybe... lol... yeah namine praticing wicca DOES seem to fit... lol... and larx TOTALLY is whipped! lol XP i LOVED the 'you are so whipped i could put you on some pie' LOL XD axel's great like that... lolz...

huggles

k

OMG! so far this seems similar to a fic called 'waiting' by a spot of bother... only this seems more fast paced... coolies! lol..

k

So much love for you right now. Seriously. Lovelovelove.

Ohgod, I really am convinced you are in the same league with Dual and Ria and The Writer-san, if not better. Because I have never, ever read anything this simple, this beautiful and something that is so /right/. This was stunningly amazing and heartbreakingly beautiful. Thank you for writing this, hon.

OMG i luved the way roxas put his lips on axel's!

lol anyways the story is great so update soon! :D

YOu know what my friend is playing KH1 right now and I almost cried watching the beginning I feel obsessed. Anywho Akuroku is teh greatest and this fic rawked

Despite fear of sounding silly, I'll say this anyway: Aw.

Oi! Great story. I just adored how well you wrote it. Especially the ending.