 killer0shorti 2009-05-08 . chapter 3nice job. i wish u gave more flashes of the future to see what profession he would pick. |
 Green Penguin 2009-01-12 . chapter 3aww...i love that. i could actually see that happening, little robbie trying to make clancy feel a little better. if this was canon, i bet it would work a lot like this. so cool.
can't wait to see what else there is--keep it up! i love little chase (am suffering from massive chase withdrawal. |
 Harm Marie 2008-10-09 . chapter 3Neat chapter. |
 Dream's Abyss 2008-09-07 . chapter 3I just love mini-Chase. |
 thevigilante15 2008-07-10 . chapter 3Great start! |
 whatever 2008-07-10 . chapter 3 that was great. i hope u update soon. |
 Jules-foil 2008-07-10 . chapter 3You know what I'd like to see? And I know this makes me kind of evil, but I'd like to see the team lose a patient they would have originally saved. Here's my reasoning: so many times in the series Chase's ideas and contributions have been scoffed at, not by House!, but by his co-workers. Cameron and Foreman always seem so smug in their assumed superiority over Chase, but how many times have Chase's disregarded ideas or musings turned out to be right or at least crucial to unraveling the case? I think your story is a great setup to force Cameron and Foreman to acknowledge Chase's contribution to the team. Maybe you could pick a patient that Chase was primarily responsible for saving (primarily besides House that is, it shouldn't be hard to find) and have that patient die. Like the one that the team had to try to save themselves when House and Cuddy were stuck on that plane! That's perfect! It was totally Chase that saved the day, and House won't be there to pick up Foreman and Cameron's slack. And then when House comes back while he's berating them he could point out that 'Chase would have gotten it' or they could come to that conclusion on their own (though I doubt their egos would let them). What do you think? |
 victoria 2008-06-28 . chapter 2 woah, I though you forgot this story, thank you so much for this new chapter, I've been waiting for months! I hope you will continue to write, you have a real talent. |
 Green Penguin 2008-06-21 . chapter 2oh wow--i'm so glad that you continued on this--i like this scenario that you're creating our two fave characters to be in (and house making a teacher quit--wow!) i'd love to see him as a parent--that's just funny
keep it up when it hits you, its great. |
 Sandy Murray 2008-06-21 . chapter 2I'm so glad you continued with this. |
 TombeDeLaLune 2008-06-20 . chapter 2hey! an update!
I thought this story was forgotten!!
Thanks, ans update more! |
 quack675 2008-06-20 . chapter 2SQUE! I'm so happy you've added more to this story! I hope you'll update again soon. |
 fullmetaldevil 2008-03-08 . chapter 1Awesome story^^ Beautifully written! You have a LOT of talent, please continue to write! |
 Novocain 2008-03-06 . chapter 1I love it. BUT IT'S NOT ENOUGH! Where are the other snapshots?
Really, excellent job on the universe, though. I was so excited after reading the first one that I skipped straight to the sequel without reviewing, but it was really brilliant. Robbie's character is realistic and genius, and I loved their interaction.
I was hoping for more, but I've been thwarted. I'm putting this on my Alert, but I'm also putting this on your concience: I will cry every time I see my inbox and there isn't an update in it. Oh yeah, I went there. Can you sleep at night, knowing that you're making an innocent little reviewer cry?
Nah, just kidding. Seriously, excellent job. |
 Elise 2007-12-10 . chapter 1 very great fic! |