 Purplestar Leader of awesome 2009-03-15 . chapter 1AW POOR WITTLE EREK! omg this story was so sad! I feel so bad for him! Great fic. This was written really well! |
 KityPryde 2009-01-03 . chapter 1Was it... Crayak?
:)
No, I'm seriously kidding of course, lol.
Wow. I'm speechless. It was powerfully written that's all I can say. Oh yeah and... it was totally Erek! "Machine" and "no heart, mentally or physically" and revealing the fact that his memory can never fade were clues that stood out to me. You are a talented writer, when reading I could feel the same overwhelming emotions that Erek must have felt. That was intense. |
 Horseygirl 96 2008-12-03 . chapter 1Hi,
Is it Cassie?
Could
be.
the
space
bar
isn't
working
so
I
will
talk
like
this.
Is
it,
or
is
it
not,
Cassie?
Could
be
Rach.
Or
Jake.
Doute
it
is
Marco
or
Ax
Or
Tobias.
Don't
think
it
is
Tobias.
No,
I't
wouldn't
be.
G2G
ME
PS.
You
sure
build
up
tention.
Winney
The
Horse
Gentler |
 Skyflight Erek's Loyalty 2008-11-20 . chapter 1It's Erek, isn't it? It has to be. This entire fanfiction just screams "EREK!" Please reply and tell me if I'm right or not. If it is Erek (which I'm 99% sure it is) than I want to put it on my Erek community. Anyways, this was extremely well-written. I absolutely loved it. Poor Erek... |
 AkatSaku 2008-06-05 . chapter 1Everything about it reminded me about Jake, I'll have to say, but one single line made me believe it's Erek instead..
"Someone with no heart, mentally or physically."
I'd say Jake has a heart, both mentally and physically. Dunno if Erek has a heart, physically, so I go for him.
I love it! Especially how mysterious it is, never revealing the one telling the story.. =] |
 Enola Tey Esiw 2008-04-05 . chapter 1Urg... Jake? Is it Jake? Or Cassie... |
 Kaisong 2008-02-25 . chapter 1It SOUNDS like Cassie.
>.>
But I'm always wrong with these things. Dx
I'm pretty pathetic. xD
Mail me with who it is? Please? |
 dark-angel miyuki 2007-09-02 . chapter 1it is erek, right? it must be hard, never able to forget, or have those memories disapper, good story
peace out
cub scout |
 aaaaaannoyedddddddddd 2007-07-10 . chapter 1 This seemed like Aftran(or another yeerk) to me, because of this line, "that power, that horrible disgusting hold over everything that a person has known."
I thought it could also be cassie.
Anyway, lovely narrative, amazing writing, keep it up!
~me~ |
 Teen-Titans-Raven 2007-04-14 . chapter 1I would say it is Cassie because of the bit about the animals that seems so like Cassie. You also see this sort of thing in Book 18 i think where she decides to leave the team because she Killed the horkbajir even after Jake had said Enough. |
 animorph19 2007-02-09 . chapter 1 i think it's erek. this reminded me of how he felt after he overrode his systems with the pemalite crystal and killed a bunch of controllers to save the animorphs. |
 Viper72 2007-02-05 . chapter 1 dont have time to log in but in but i know who this is. Jake |
 Eos Erigeneia 2007-02-03 . chapter 1I think it's Cassie. She was always the one to raise moral issues and the one to suffer the most when she was required to fight. Her lifelong affinity with animals comes out in this and the fact that she considers any life, however small, as a precious and fundamental part of existence.
Very well written. It would be impossible to come out of a war such as this - or indeed, any war - without being affected. The ghosts and memories would stay with you for your whole life. We all think it would be amazing, myself included, to become an Animorph, but are we prepared for the consequences? Warfare is certainly not something to be taken lightly, by any means.
For fear of sounding even more unbearably depressive, I will get on with the actual review. I feel that you have brought out everything mentioned in the above very well and I urge you to carry on writing. Thank you very much.
Eos Erigeneia x |
 Vickie1 2007-02-02 . chapter 1You know, at first glance looking at some parts, I kinda thought this was describing my OC Kimberly. ^^; Ha-hee-hee. Until I saw 'machine' at the end. Gomen...
But I'm guessing now, it could be Erek. Me thinks. Good job on it :D |
 Library Bum 2007-02-02 . chapter 1Wow, that was surprising. I'm guessing Cassie, it sounds a lot like her. |